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Mark S. Bacon

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Batter up

The baseball season is upon us.  With only a few at-bats, some hitters’ averages are distorted.  Night games in some parts of the country require fans to bring wool sweaters and order coffee or hot chocolate instead of beer.  Expectations are high, predictions plentiful.  Here’s a bit of (100-word) flash fiction that celebrates the national pastime and something else that’s supposed to bloom in spring.

Love and Baseball

The game at Dodger Stadium had just begun. Guy was adjusting his Dodgers cap and checking out the park when he spotted the attractive redhead sitting several rows away. She saw him, too.

“Barry,” he said to his friend next to him, “see that woman back there?”

“Yeah. Hey, she’s cute.”

“That’s Susie Naylor.”

The Susie Naylor, your long-lost love? The woman you said you’d give anything to find again?”

“Uh huh. I’m going to talk to her.”

Minutes later, Guy plopped back down in his seat. “It’d never work.”

“Was she married?”

“No, she’s a San Francisco Giants fan.”

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Pigeon Lady

Gladys and her friend watched an elderly woman spread bread crumbs around her on a park bench. As hundreds of pigeons descended, dozens of onlookers jostled for a better view.

“I’ve seen her before,” said Gladys. “These birds are filthy, but everyone wants to see. C’mon squeeze in.”

Soon two policewomen moved through the crowd and collared the woman feeding the birds. Three other cops grabbed two men in the crowd.

“Yes, I am missing my wallet,” Gladys later told the policeman who questioned bystanders. “But what happened to the poor pigeon lady?”

Said the cop: “You’re the pigeon, lady.”

From: Karensdifferentcorners.wordpress.com

Review:
Cops, Crooks & Other Stories in 100 Words

I have to give Mark a thumbs up! Writing is hard no matter what you write, but try writing a story, with a beginning, a middle and an end in only 100 words and he did it!  Now that’s tight writing.

Each story was unique and different. Some made me smile, while others made me chuckle. And then there were the ones that  had a twist and a surprise ending.

If you only have a few minutes of time to read, pick up the e-book. I guarantee you won’t want to put it down.