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Follow Woolrich down this alley

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The Black Path of Fear
by Cornell Woolrich
Ballantine Books  1982
160 pages
Price varies (available used only)

Bill Scott is honest, though obviously not the brightest guy in the world.  But he can’t help himself.  He’s in love.  Unfortunately Eve Roman, his new love, is married to a Miami mob boss.  But she loves Scott, too, so they runaway together—to Havana.

In the first few pages of Cornell Woolrich’s The Black Path of Fear, Eve is stabbed to death in a Cuban nightclub and the police blame Scott.  We get the backstory of how Scott and Mrs. Roman got together in a long flashback, but the majority of  the book—which hour-by-hour covers no more than a day and a half—describes Scott’s desperate attempts to find the murderer and clear himself.  His chances look dim.  He doesn’t speak Spanish, the police are combing the city for him, he knows no one in Havana and when it comes down to it, a big part of him doesn’t really care.  Eve is dead.

I’m working my way through Woolrich novels and short stories.  It’s a rewarding journey although Black Path is not his best.  My 1982 printing of the book (it was first published in 1944) reads almost as if it lacks a final edit.   The dialog occasionally sounds a bit off, Scott’s hat mysteriously appears in one scene—after he’d dropped it somewhere else—and he doesn’t use his love for the dead woman as an argument for his innocence.

That’s the bad news.  The good news is Woolrich takes a certainly unoriginal plot (though undoubtedly copied many times since) and builds it into a succession of nail-biting scenes in some of the most Black Path of Fearmemorably ugly, foreboding settings you can imagine.   In one scene Scott is escorted by police down a suffocatingly narrow  alley—too small to accommodate a car—in a run-down portion of Havana’s Chinatown.  The alley smelled “like asafetida and somebody burning feathers, and the lee side of a sewer.”  It was also dim.

It wasn’t of an even darkness; it was mottled darkness.  Every few yards or so an oil lamp or kerosene torch or a Chinese paper lantern, back within some doorway or some stall opening, would squirt out a puddle of light to relieve the gloom.  They were different colors, these smears, depending on the reflector they filtered through: orange and sulphur-green, and once even a sort of purple-red, were spewed around on the dirty walls like grape juice.

In another scene Scott is feeling his way in pitch darkness across a silent and seemingly empty skid-row office when something pricks his ear.  It’s a clever, suspenseful set-up that leads to a creative result.

Scott is similar to many Woolrich protagonists, an ordinary guy dumped into extraordinary circumstances and challenged to save someone else, himself, his sanity, or all three.  Emotions, not only of fear, but loneliness, disgust and hopelessness often drive his plots.

She had the look on her face of someone who has just been granted a quick glimpse down into the bottommost depths of hell from the top of the stairs.  And didn’t turn away quickly enough.

Woolrich was a noir master.  Although he’s not as well known as Raymond Chandler or Dashiell Hammett, according to his biographer Woolrich influenced not only the French Roman noir novels but the bleak Hollywood crime dramas, film noir.

To me, noir represents not only a grim, dark setting or plot, but a style of writing. And Woolrich’s style is unmistakable: “Silence fell, and we kicked it around between us for a while.”

Like the majority of Woolrich’s novels and short stories, Black Path was dramatized, in this case, many times: One of several radio versions starred Cary Grant (1946), the movie version (1946) starred Robert Cummings and Peter Lorre and a TV drama (1954) had James Arness as Scott.

Black Path was one of Woolrich’s “black” series in the 1940s, when the author was in his prime, cranking out so many thrilling novels that he released some under two pen names, William Irish and George Hopley.  Biographer Francis Nevins, Jr. called Woolrich the Poe of the Twentieth Century.  Black Path is an entertaining, compelling read, but stick with Woolrich titles for the whole dark ride through the 1940s.

Writing advice from mystery authors

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Some years ago (but not as many as you might think) when I was in grad school, I enrolled in a summer seminar, part of the National Writing Project.  One of the other students, who was a high school English teacher, gave me a marvelous little book of quotations.  I’ve treasured it ever since.  It’s one of those few books that’s always on the top of my desk along with a dictionary, AP Stylebook and a few others.

Today I thought I would share some of my favorite bits of writing advice from mystery writers.  You can do a Google or Yahoo search forWriters quote book sml  5061 “writer quotations” and possibly find some of these quotes but not all of them and not in the same place.  My quote book is wonderful.   I turn to it for inspiration, a laugh or both.  See availability notes below.

“My purpose is to entertain myself first and other people secondly.”  John D. MacDonald

“Those big shot writers…could never dig the fact that there are more salted peanuts consumed than caviar.”   Mickey Spillane

“At least half the mystery novels published violate the law that the solution, once revealed, must seem to be inevitable.”   Raymond Chandler

“I try to leave out the parts that people skip.”   Elmore Leonard

“The best time for planning a book is when you’re doing the dishes.”                 Agatha Christie

References

The book I have is “The Writer’s Quotation Book; A Literary Companion, Third Edition,” James Charlton, editor.  It’s certainly out of print, but used copies are available in several places online, including Powell’s.   Used copies of the fourth (and presumably last) edition are available at Amazon and Barnes and Noble.

Miscellaneous maliciousness

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One way to get useful background for a detective novel is to spend time in prison.  Another way to look at it would be: writing a novel is one way to pass the time when you’re in the slammer for murder and various other crimes.

Alaric Hunt is probably not the first con to write a crime novel but one of the latest, and thanks to a feature story in the New York Times Magazine, one of the better known.   As reported by Sarah Weinman, Hunt’s life is a sad case.  His abusive mother died when he was young and his life went downhill from there. In a lame attempt to get money so his brother could go to music school, the two hatched a plot to rob a jewelry store.  Arson was involved and a young woman died.  Hunt was sentenced to life.  He’s now 44.  He went to prison at 19.

His novel, written in prison, won a prize and a publishing contract.   His whole story makes fascinating reading.

Also noted

This space has devoted many words to the future of the publishing business and the popularity of e-books.   Last year saw more consolidation.  We used to refer to the major U.S. publishers as the big six.  That ended in 2013.

Random House merged with Penguin creating the largest publishing house in North America.   According to Publishers Weekly, the company will release more than 15,000 titles each year and employ more than 10,000 people.  Instead of the big six, noted one writer, we now have the Big One and the following four.   It’s estimated that Penguin-Random House will control about a quarter of the U.S. publishing market.

Speculation as to what this will do to the book market has been all over the map with some predicting the consolidation and ultimate end of the publishing business as we know it.  The authoritative Library Journal published a detailed analysis discussing how the merger will affect readers, authors, other publishers, Amazon and the book economy.  Important reading.

Favorite movie lines about writing

In the recent Woody Allen movie, “Midnight in Paris,” Owen Wilson plays a writer named Gil who is somehow transported to Paris of the 1920s.  There he meets Ernest Hemingway (played with panache by Corey Stoll).  Gil gives Hemingway a manuscript he’s been agonizing over and asks him to give him his opinion of his novel:

Hemingway:   “My opinion is, I hate it.”

Gil: “You haven’t even read it.”

Hemingway:  “If it’s bad, I’ll hate it because I hate bad writing.  If it’s good, I’ll be envious and hate it all the more.  You don’t want the opinion of another writer.”

Hyperlinks:

New York Times Magazine article on writer/con Alaric Hunt

Publisher’s Weekly reports the merger

Analysis of Penguin/Random House merger