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Mark S. Bacon

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‘As inconspicuous as a privy on the front lawn’ –a sample of Raymond Chandler

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Raymond Chandler, creator of Philip Marlowe, one of the best-known detectives to ever make his way down a dark alley, was born in 1888.  His novels were made into movies and he wrote screenplays for acclaimed motion pictures including “Double Indemnity”–likely the best film of the noir period–and “Strangers on a Train.”

He moved to England with his mother at an early age, attended school there and later studied in Germany and France.  He became a naturalized British citizen and served in World War I.  After the war he was a journalist in London for a time then he moved back to the US, eventually living in southern California where he went to work as a bookkeeper for an oil company.  When he lost his job in 1932 he returned to writing and published his first crime story in 1933 in “The Black Mask,” a pulp journal that also published Cornell Woolrich and other up-and-coming detective writers.

For all his influence and prominence, his output was relatively modest compared to many other crime novelists, this owing to the fact he was in his 50s when he wrote his first novel, “The Big Sleep,” in 1939.   He wrote seven novels–almost all household names to mystery readers–and about two dozen short stories and novellas.

James Bond author Ian Fleming said that Chandler offered, “some of the finest dialogue written in any prose today.”

Recently I read one collection of his long short stories, “Trouble Is My Business.” Here’s a sample of his distinctive prose from that book:

From a description of an over-weight corpse:  “…his neck had as many folds as a concertina.”

A bright yellow convertible stood out from a row of other cars.  It was, “about as inconspicuous as a privy on the front lawn.”

Describing a suspicious character: “His voice had the quiet careful murmur of the cell block and the exercise yard.”Trouble is My Business

A brunette speaks to Marlowe in, “a voice as silky as a burnt crust of toast.”

Later he says, “She was looking at me now as if I had come to wash the windows, but at an inconvenient time.”

One of my favorite Chandler character sketches:  “She just stood and looked at me, a long, lean, hungry brunette, with rouged cheekbones, thick black hair parted in the middle, a mouth made for triple-decker sandwiches….”

And finally this observation from Marlowe, “Clammy hands and the people who own them make me sick.”

Sources/links:

http://www.biography.com/people/raymond-chandler-9244073

http://chandlersite.blogspot.com/

http://home.comcast.net/~mossrobert/

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Raymond_Chandler

Vanessa contest results

Flash fiction contest results posted

Congratulations to the winners of the flash fiction contest sponsored by Vanessa Shields and me.  To find out who won, check out Vanessa’s blog here: Vanessa Shields

Flash fiction news

Short Mystery Fiction Society

If you’re interested in flash fiction mystery stories, crime/mystery short stories or even tales a bit longer, you ought to check out the Short Mystery Fiction Society website.  It can be a portal to enjoying some of the best short crime fiction today.

The SMFS is made up of writers and mystery fans who regularly exchange comments, via email, on all topics related to the genre.  Much of it centers on the craft of writing mysteries along with comments on recently published stories.

Each year the organization recognizes the best short mystery fiction through its Derringer Awards.  Categories include flash fiction (up to 1,000) words, short stories, long stories and novelettes.  While the winning stories are not usually posted on the site, this is a great place to find the names of talented authors you can follow.Short mystery soc

For example, last year Bill Pronzini earned the Edward D. Hoch Memorial Golden Derringer for Lifetime Achievement.  He’s collected numerous Edgar Award nominations and many nominations for the Shamus Award from the Private Eye Writers of America including one for Cat’s Paw for which he won the Shamus.  He’s the author or co-author of ten short story collections.

Here are two other names you might want to follow: Allan Leverone and Nicola Kennington.   The former is a short story writer and author of five novels, the latter has a skimpy web presence, but both were nominated for Derringers this year in the flash fiction category and both of their  intense, hard-boiled (is that redundant?) stories are available online through links on the SMFS site.   Both great reads.

Flash fiction contest winners selected

The winning stories in author Vanessa Shields’ Mystery Flash Fiction Contest have been selected and the writers’ names will be posted soon.  Ms. Shields and I reviewed all the entries (I judged the stories blind, not knowing the author names), debated their relative merits (or not) and agreed on the top stories.   We hope to make this an annual contest, so spread the word.

Mysteries and Murder is top seller

Last month Mysteries and Murder, my small collection of mystery flash fiction stories, made the top ten weekly sales list with Ether Books of the UK.  M&M art  dker bk  2377 copyThanks to all who downloaded the book.   Like all the Ether books, it’s designed to be read on your smart phone.  Simply download the Ether app and you’re ready to go.

Hyperlinks:

Short Mystery Fiction Society

Bill Pronzini

Derringer flash fiction winners

Vanessa Shields

Ether Books